英语写作常见错误分析
1. 句子缺谓语
1)  The building like a match box. 
2)  He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.
2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。
1)  A worker of the farm lead us to the field.
2)  All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.
3.时态错误
1)  When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed.
2)  What are you doing this time yesterday?
4.词性混用
1)  She enjoys study English.
2)  If anyone against the plan, please let me know.
5.介词误用
1)  In my surprise, he has got the first prize.
2)  He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.
3)  Don’t read under the sun.
6.冠词误用
1)  We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.
2)  Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion.
3)  The history is actually a very interesting subject.
7.名词的数混淆
1)  It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.
2)  There is always traffic jam.
8.动词用法错误
1)  Where are you come from?
2)  When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.
3)  He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.
4)  The accident was happened in 1999.
9.习惯用法错误
1)  The actor in this movie is very beautiful.
2)  I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.
3)  The reason is because he does not know what to do next.
10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清
  误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didn’t stop her car.     Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The  old man and I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. The old man couldn’t move ,   I decided to help him.
正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didn’t stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away.   Fortunately, I saw the car’s number. It’s AC864. Noticing the old man 
couldn’t move, I decided to help him.
11.画蛇添足 、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）
修改前：
 A famous sportsman was giving a   speech which was rather interesting.
修改后：
A famous sportsman was giving an interesting   speech.
修改前
 Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. What’s more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot.
修改后
  Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. What’s more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier.  Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories.  The situation is becoming more and more serious.
修改前：
As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on .
修改后：
  As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.
12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑 
    性，可读性。
修改前
Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.
修改后
    Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car—Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.
修改前
Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn’t stop and hit the old man. The driver didn’t stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman.
修改后
Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didn’t stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman.
 

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